By Priest. English translation by 7 Seas.
Notes on culture and translation decisions.
Pages 288 - 414.
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长庚低声道:“让开。”
Chang Geng doesn’t shout. He lowered his voice and politely warned the people around him (that he was going to stab them if they didn’t) “Move aside.”
Definitely check the Glossary for 江湖 Jianghu. It’s the foundation of an entire genre of story, very nearly of the entire Chinese culture.
Gu Yun is never careless! And he also doesn’t care what you think of him.
Hmmm. Self-deluding people of limited education and even less critical thinking skill. Never seen one before.
姐姐。Big sister. Polite way for teenager to refer to a young lady.
Yao Zhen knows that Gu Yun’s version of the story will get him into trouble. Shen Yi must be glad that at least it’s not him having to fabricate Gu Yun’s story this time!
No French warning. Just a 小心 = “Careful!” as he attacked.
“功夫扎实,主要看自己肯下多大工夫,功夫厉害,主要是战场上生死一线的情况多了,谁教都一样。”
It’s hard to translate. The first and second half of the argument match perfectly, and we’re talking about a topic for which English doesn’t really have the vocabulary.
扎实 = solid, strong.
厉害 = intense, amazing, devastating (in a good way).
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The "Imperial Censorate" here is 御史台, which is the department, not the person. Chang Geng would never slap another person in full view of the court; but he would not hesitate to admistratively slap another department if he felt it was justified.
So. The classic punishment for adultery was to be put in a pig cage and thrown into the river to drown. I don't know how I know this little bit of trivia, seeing as I was raised in the west and my only contact to Chinese culture was my very conservative Chinese mother; but I know this. Adulterers get drowned.
谋事在人,成事在天。 Plotting depends the person, success depends on the heavens. I just wanted you to know that it's symmetrical in Chinese, even though it doesn't translate that way.
The "tactlessly" here is a translation of 不长眼色, which I think could be explained better as "not reading the room" or "not taking hints."
It's not that Ge Chen is tactless so much as he is clueless to the tension between Gu Yun and Chang Geng.
In the online Chinese version that I read, the line is "Zixi! Don't go!" which explains why Chang Geng is reaching out to grab him in a panic -- he thinks Gu Yun is leaving him.
Page 382
Top: The Chinese here is "看看我说话!" which can be translated as either
-- "Look at me while I am talking to you," (though that feels weird) or -- "Look at me and speak - respond to me,"
...both of which are a little different from what is actually written in English. The "look at me when you speak" translation threw me for a second because Chang Geng isn't speaking and hasn't said anything for a while.
Bottom: Liangjiang is 两江 which is Two Rivers. (The north side and the south side of the river?)
This section is actually so pretty:
“天时地利、花前月下、水到渠成”
The perfect time (天时) and place (地利); in front of the flowers (花前) and under the moon (月下); when success is assured (where water flows (水到) a canal will inevitably form (渠成)).
Carriage Door. The carriage door opened, and out came Shen Yi. He had hitched a ride with Miss Chen so that he could leave his home unnoticed.
(When I read the English, I thought that the door was the courtyard door and got really confused.)
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A co-worker the other day commented on how he had heard that the Chinese government was trying to crack down on femininity in men in the media, and I went crazy trying to find that awesome video of Wang Yibo wearing Chanel runway looks. Women’s Chanel runway looks. And I was blathering on and on (while still trying to stay professional and not-weird-obsessed) about how Wang Yibo can just DO that, and I can’t imagine anyone being able to stop him, or even slow him down, just because he likes wearing dangly earrings and orange eyeshadow. And women’s jackets.
I couldn’t find the video again on tumblr, but I had some success on YouTube:
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Enjoy!
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I read Reader Comments this time (in the kunnu.com version), and I must admit, I really enjoyed them. The last chapters (113, the Official Last Chapter, and 126, the Last Chapter Published) are full of comments commemorating First Read Complete! Second Read Complete! Fifth Read! Nth Read!
So many “Nth Read!” comments. I can’t think of any book I’ve read more than three times, much less so many times that one would lose count. It’s not like putting on your favorite movie while you do your chores - you have to Concentrate and Focus to read!
It’s nice to know that there are people out there who also can’t find their way out of the MDZS rabbit hole, who also love WangXian so much that they re-read and re-read and re-read, who know exactly what’s going to happen but still want to experience it again and again and again.
And there Will be fireworks this weekend, to commemorate “my Second Read-Through 😘”.
(What book have you read more than once? Do you know why you go back to it over and over?)
I now own Stars of Chaos, Vol 1!!! And pre-ordered Vol. 2 while I was out!! Yay!!!
And now, a brief yet pathetic looking-for-sympathy note:
The 南疆山匪 (southern border mountain bandits??) arc is So Hard for me! It’s all “This character who is a friend of that character who you just met is laying a trap for this other character who is a friend of yet another character that you have Not yet met yet, plot plot convoluted plot” with absolutely no kissing and practically no pining and this is exactly why I am re-reading 杀破狼 Stars of Chaos while making a chapter-by-chapter Notes document of Romance Only for future rereads.
My 杀破狼 Romance Only Notes only have a couple of paragraphs from Ch 40, and it doesn’t look like I’ll have much from Ch 41.
This is taking too much discipline to read.
Priest, give me less massacring and more Mutual Magnetism!
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