“Your team is coming in to negotiate,” says Whumper. Whumpee’s eyes brighten, but Whumper continues, “They want to see you alive, so you’re going to kneel at my feet and you’re not going to speak. And before you refuse to agree to that” - Whumper holds up some ropes and a gag - “You can do it voluntarily or I can tie your wrists to your ankles and your neck to your knees to keep you kneeling and gag you to keep you silent.”
categorized by behavior
some of these might be a bit similar to each other, but I had fun making this list
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defiant + broken
o doesn’t want to give in, show they’re in pain, give whumper the satisfaction, but is slowly being broken down and losing their will, their pride, their everything and flinches any time a hand is raised or at the slightest show of violence, though still fights and thrashes at every opportunity
cinnamon roll
o the innocent pure bean that never did anything wrong, and is now reduced to a crying, pleading, begging mess
completely unprepared
o similar to cinnamon roll, but not exactly, depending on personality. someone who has never been hurt before and may come from a very high / prestigious position now having to deal with this new station in life, stripping them of pride and dignity and hurting them more than they ever could have imagined they would have to face
puppet
o obeys every command of the whumper in an effort to escape more pain and maybe sometimes it works…but does it really? The whumpee hates themselves for what they’re doing and others aren’t too fond of them either, though the whumper likes them for their willingness (and how easy they are to exploit)
protector
o king of self-sacrifice and the one that’s trying to hold everyone together, though they can’t let themselves show their hurts in front of the others because they feel they have to hold up that strong front, leading to them breaking down alone from both the stress and their built-up trauma
chock full of self-loathing
o what it says on the tin. feels they deserve the pain for whatever reason and is resigned, even accepting or desperate for, the stuff they go through, seeing it as almost necessary or at least, something they should be able to bear
comedian
o a bit similar to defiant if you go with a more sardonic / dark humor, but someone who copes with the pain through jokes and sarcasm, always got a quip and a one-liner to hide behind instead of revealing their true feelings
optimist
o kind of a mixture of defiant and cinnamon roll, if that makes sense. someone who wont give up hope no matter what, as a show of defiance, because even if the whumpers can make them scream and beg and plead, they try to keep their optimism as the one last thing that’s truly theirs…but even that is starting to crack.
worshipper
o someone who is so brainwashed and broken they worship their whumper, they believe the pain is necessary and that it is making them better, or that it is something special only for them
obedient + terrified
o a whumpee that obeys every command of the whumper’s to escape more pain, perhaps because of conditioning that tells them they must obey or be punished
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Feel free to add on to the list if you can think of any more!
Always happy to draw an angry beat up Whumpee 👌
Okay but whump scenario where the whumper is forcing the whumpee to scream in order to draw out their friends.
The whumpee tied up, refusing to scream because it would spell doom for their allies. Whumper grins and says, "Oh, I'll make you scream for sure..." before they began to torture the whumpee. Beating them, slashing them up with a knife, whipping them, you name it. The whumper wants them to scream loud and clear to lure their team to the whumper.
Whumpee screaming from the pain involuntarily, tears streaming down their cheeks from both the torture and the guilt that their screams would inevitably draw out their team to their deaths.
A roughly 40k-word crack fic of Faolan from Mercury and Time being recaptured by @darkthingshappen 's Finlay Iver (original whumper). This is a collab that was originally for the @the-whumpers-soiree, but kind of evolved into its own thing.
This story contains elements of explicit noncon, references to past violent events, including noncon, torture, among other adult/dark themes. Minors DNI. Heed the warnings on each chapter.
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Story:
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5 (explicit noncon)
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11 (explicit noncon)
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Taglist (below cut):
oddsconvert, sparrowsage
@whumpsday ‘s Jim and Kane
@/myrderi ‘s Moneymakers
@whumblr ‘s :
Home is Where the Hurt is
Custody Series
@painsandconfusion ‘s With You
@whump-world ‘s Deal with the Devil (NSFW)
@spookyboywhump ‘s Wren/Zander/Cain
@whumpshaped ‘s Deal with the Devil (crack whump)
@livelaughwhump ‘s Worthless
@whumpshaped ‘s Dimitri series
@whumpzone ‘s Linden and Colton (SOME NSFW)
Tomas and Rowe
@the-bloody-sadist ‘s Dancing with Death
@hurting-fictional-people ‘s Whumpee Betrays Caretaker
@whump-tr0pes ‘s Honor Bound
@whumpers-inc ‘s Who Wants To Be A Whumpee?
@thoughtsonhurtandcomfort ‘s Arrin and Alex (SOME NSFW)
@secretwhumplair ‘s No Warrior (some implied NSFW)
(also since this is gonna be ongoing and constantly edited pls lemme know if every time i edit it tags yall again and i’ll unlink the @‘s 😅💖)
I love crying in whump stories because it's such a familiar human instinct, but it also carries a lot of meaning. Generally, people think crying is a sign of weakness. It's a perfectly natural and normal response to stress, but it's seen as something you should avoid, and oftentimes crying in front of someone you don't know well is uncomfortable for both parties. There’s a kind of stigma around showing this level of emotion. Being overly sensitive is usually viewed as a negative trait.
If someone cries, especially in front of other people, they are stressed enough that they can’t repress that feeling of being overwhelmed. It's a sign of vulnerability. Being pushed to tears can make a character feel completely powerless. It's degrading. It's also one of the few things that is hard to hide. Even if a character manages to keep a stoic front, a few tears and a trembling voice can make that all fall apart.
If a character feels comfortable enough to cry in front of someone, however, they're comfortable enough to be vulnerable with them. They can truly express what they're feeling. There's a strong level of trust involved. They don't feel like they have to pretend. They don't feel like they need to hide all the ugly parts of themselves, because they know they can always depend on that other person.
I just really love weepy characters in fiction ok :'''')
Ya know what’s nice?
Resignation.
A Whumpee who is eerily calm when they’re (re)captured. They accept the handcuffs. They hold out their hands and let themself be cuffed.
Or they just turn around when ordered and place their hands on their back. And they smile at their partner.
All the while their partner, friend, caretaker is losing it.
“You can’t do this!” they shout, straining against the henchmen holding them.
And Whumpee is not sure if it’s addressed to them or their captors.
Whumper handcuffs Whumpee’s wrists behind their back and puts the key on a chain around Whumpee’s neck, where they can’t reach it.
Add an iron collar and attach the whumpee’s cuffs to the collar. This is reduces the whumpee‘s movement and use of their hands and arms. This is especially useful if your whumpee has a violent streak and has a tendency to attack their whumper or tries to defend other whumpees. If you have captured a team of would-be heroes, I recommend placing the leader in this type of restraints— this makes the leader helpless and dependent on their team to help them eat and drink, if you decide to feed your captives. The whumpee restrained in this manner also can’t get up if they fall, which is excellent for those who attempt escape often.
Masterlist
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