The Suffering Never Ends

@deadandgaysetanta @queen-of-hobgobblers

Aw, hell yis!!!! :]

I have officially decided that I am going to rewrite Frankenstein as an amazing YouTube movie titled Vicky F and Creepy C

My friends will star in it, I will be the screen writer... It's going to be a hot mess!!! :] can't wait to start filming, all I have to do now is... Well, write the script!

Questions to ask beta readers

General:

Were you confused at any point of the story?

What genre would you say this book is?

When did you put the story down?

Is the ending satisfying?

If you had to cut 3 scenes what would they be?

When did you feel like the story really began?

What was the last book you read before this story?

Characters:

Do you get any of the characters names confused?

Which character is your favorite?

If you had to remove a character who would you and why? (you don't have to remove the character, just make sure their role is meaningful)

Which character do you relate to the most?

Which character do you relate to the least?

Do the characters feel real?

Are character relationships believable?

Are the goals clear and influence the plot?

Are the characters distinct (voice, motivations, etc)

Setting:

Which setting was clearest to you?

Which setting was the most memorable?

Am including enough/too much detail?

Plot and conflict:

Are the internal and external conflicts well defined for the main characters?

Are the internal conflicts and the external conflicts organic and believable?

Are there enough stakes?

Are the plot twists believable but still unexpected?

eat drink sleep play

**Update For the people asking I asked her and she bought the frog tea set HERE 🐸

Leverage: Redemption (2021-present) The Hustler Job (S03E04)

does anyone wanna hold hands until we feel a little braver

Last Song- The Horse and the Infant -Jorge Rivera-Herrans, cast of Epic the musical

Favorite color- usually earth tones, specifically green and pink tho.

Currently watching - Gravity Falls as well, 😂 I swear that wasn't planned, and also on my 5th( I think) rewatch of Leverage.

Last movie - I think Journey to Atlantis? I'm pretty sure that's what it's called.

Sweet/spicy/savory - typically savory, though sweet wins out quite often

Relationship status- single, pretty ok with it, but dear lords above let Aphrodite send me a girlfriend 🙏🙏🙏🙏

Current obsessions- Epic the musical, marvel comics, and Leverage, although those last two are kinda always on my mind 😂

Last thing you googled?- Does Billy Maximoff have blue eyes? (Spoiler alert; he does)

@deadandgaysetanta @redkarmakai

I don't have a lot of mutuals on here :(

nine people i want to get to know better

tagged by @nix-nihili

LAST SONG? - After Midnight by Chappell Roan

FAVORITE COLOUR? - Any and all shades of blue

CURRENTLY WATCHING? - Gravity Falls

LAST MOVIE? - Kabhi Kushi Khabhie Gham..

SWEET/SPICY/SAVOURY? - Sweet :p

RELATIONSHIP STATUS? - Single

CURRENT OBSESSIONS? - Chappell Roan and Dead Boy Detectives

LAST THING YOU GOOGLED? - How to cite digital photos in APA format

tagging @minty-cheese @screwlowes @tmblrofshame @ingridmatthews @purgatory606 @unidentifiedlyingobject @edwinspaynes @many-gay-magpies @babyseraphim

Love this so much