I Kind Of Want To See A Story About An Elf; Tall, Beautiful, Clumsy As Fuck, And An Industrial Worker

All the things wrong with Suicide Squad

So I came back from watching suicide squad yesterday, and basically I’m disappointed;

- The plot was all over the place, and it wasn’t as stable as any movie I’ve ever watched. You’re supposed to create the plot, then add in characters where needed, not add in the characters and scramble to find a decent plot that combines every one of them (While adding in a minor character to kill off later).

- As amazing as Harley was, I’ll have to say the only thing wrong with her was the fact that her accent wasn’t thick enough. Yeah, the actor had a faint accent going on, but the person who Harley Quinn was supposed to be based off was known for her dramatic New York accent, which was given to Harley as well.

- It looks as though the creators were grasping at straws to try and make the movie seem believable and realistic. Trust me, there’s nothing realistic about a crocodile guy, a guy who creates fire, or a witch. They could’ve done so much better without trying to add in modern world realism.

- Slipknot never had a very good introduction. In fact, my Step Dad asked me at the end of the movie who he was, and where he had come up. Slipknot was obviously gonna die, you could tell the second he showed up. The least you could do was give him the same introduction as the rest of the Suicide Squad members. No one reacted to his death. If Diablo or Captain Boomerang died, it would have influenced the plot, and gotten a reaction out of the viewers. No one knew who Slipknot was, so no one felt any sort of connection to him.

- Harley Quinn is known to have been the girlfriend of Joker, which is shown obviously throughout most of the movie. But, she was also known to have a relationship with Deadshot once the two break up. It could have given the movie a lot more potential if there was a bit of a love triangle.

- Joker in my opinion was flawless. I loved his acting, he was brilliant. But once I talked to my dad afterwards, he had a complaint I don’t agree with, but I’ll list it anyways. While Joker was speaking, his voice would go soft, then loud within a split second. His acting just seemed a bit forced is all.

- The enchantress was perfectly fine beforehand. Then they had to give her a wardrobe upgrade. She was so creepy, and she actually gave me the chills when she was introduced. She would of been an amazing villain without changing her clothes.

why not both?

I hate how my mental illnesses just suck the creativity out of me. I used to draw so often but now I’m lucky if I get one drawing out every few months. I used to love to read but I haven’t finished a book in over half a year. I love to play video games but I’m so fucking drained I don’t even want to do that anymore. I start them but never finish them.

I just want my life back.

A Somewhat Useful Masterpost for Writers

Websites for Critique:

Authonomy It’s been a while since I used this website in particular, but it’s useful for helpful critique and to get your original works out there. If your book get on the top five list at the end of the month Harper Collins will read it for possible publication.

Teen Ink

Figment

Fiction Press

ReviewFuse

and of course… Tumblr

Other Websites:

Write or Die is great if you want to give yourself a certain amount of time to write a set amount of words.

Tip of my Tongue for when you can’t remember the exact word

Character Traits Form 

Online Thesaurus where you just type in a word and you get a cluster of different words

Characters

Top 10 Questions for Creating Believable Characters

How to Create a Fictional Character

Describing Clothing and Appearance

The Difference between Ethnicity and Nationality

Describing a Voice

Characters (part 2)

How to write Funeral Directors  I’ve read quite a few fanfics where they just have funeral directors slapping clothes on a body and calling it a day. As a former funeral services major I can tell you that’s not the only thing they do.

How to write Drug Dealers

How to write Gamblers

Interview with a Hitman

Terms for royalty

Naming Characters

Behind the Name

Top Baby Names

Looking for a name that means a certain thing?

7 Rules of Picking Names

Most Common Surnames

Medical/Crime/Legal

Coma: Types, Causes, etc 

Tips for writing blood loss

Gunshot Wound Care

Examples of Hospital Forms

Common Legal Questions

The Writer’s Forensics Blog

Brain Injury Legal Guide

Types of Surgical Operations

Types of Mental Health Problems

A Day in the Life of a Mental Hospital Patient

Global Black Market Information Because where else would you find out how much money it takes to get a 16 year old girl to kill someone in Mexico?

Crime Scene Science

Examining Mob Mentality

How Street Gangs Work

Other Helpful Stuff

Poisonous Herbs and Plants

The Psychology of Color

The Meaning behind Rose color

Compare Character Heights - I personally love this site so much. 

Types of Swords

Color Symbolism

How a handgun works

Blueprints for Houses

The Six Types of Haunting Activities

The Difference Between lay and lie

10 Words You Need to Stop Misspelling

5 Easy Tips to Improve Your Writing

How to Write a Eulogy

Types of Crying

Career Masterpost

Avoiding LGBTQ Stereotypes

Tips for Writing Ghost Stories

A Spell to See Spirits

Make Graphics out of Quotes

Superstitions and More

The 12 Common Archetypes

Language of Flowers

Military Sign Language

A Visual Dictionary of Tops

Describing Tiaras

What author do you most write like? (I’ve gotten Stephenie Meyer)

12 Realistic Woman Body Shapes

Japanese honorifics

Dress Up Games  I personally like to find games that I can make my OCs with.

Azalea’s Dolls

Doll Divine x

Dress Up Games

Shidabeeda Games

Free Writing Software

Google Docs (automatically saves as you write. 100% recommend)

EverNote

OpenOffice (a free version of Microsoft Office)

Articles

25 Steps To Edit the Unmerciful Suck out of Your Story

10 Rules for Writing First Drafts

10 Things Teenage Writers Should Know About Writing

Create a Plot Outline in 8 Easy Steps

Publishing Agencies to Stay Away From

5 Ways to Make Your Novel Helplessly Addictive

Books:

On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft by Stephen King

Elmore Leonard’s 10 Rules of Writing

Chicken Soup for the Writer’s Soul

Writing Great Books for Young Adults

Inspirational Quotes: x x 

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me: *is constantly worried im annoying*

me: hey guys

no one:

me in my head: fuCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK

PLEASE REBLOG

I’m considering coming out to my family as non-binary, and so today I brought up the subject of non-binary gendering/transgendering with my Dad as a casual conversational topic. He’s told me that if somebody is born a boy then they “should stay a fucking boy” and not trans to a girl or be a boy some days/girl other days/genderless other days.

I told him that I think gender identity should be something one can choose for themselves, and he says that nobody thinks like that and anybody who is trans/non-binary will just be shunned by every member of society they meet. He doesn’t think that people support n-b/t communities, because he doesn’t. He says to me that not staying one’s natural gender is wrong and against the point of being born a boy/girl.

Every person who reblogs this will have their URL written in a full-size writing book and when it is full I will show it to my father to illustrate to him the amount of people who believe that being non-binary is a valid gender identity.

Do you ever just start to get tired of someone taking you for granted, not putting in any effort and just expecting you to be there when it’s convenient for them because yeah

Could be used for pose references

Spider Gwen

Someone make them regret this omg 😂

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=After so long I came back to digital AND got introduced to tumble so :)=