I Have A Character With Paranoid Schizophrenia Who Starts The Story Not Being Medicated And Doesn't Really

*Laughs Nervously* Oh, dear...

Sun...? Earth...? Lunar...? You should probably check on your brother.... He's...not okay...

(Seriously, though, someone needs to talk to him aside from Monty; I'm worried he'll do something he'll regret...)

This is great. I love the peanut.

It reminds me a bit of Winnie the Pooh art style ❤️

My guess on what Dazzle or Evelyn will probably look like. A tiny little deer.

"I am Worm Horse, and I... I am sad."

"Why are you sad, Worm Horse?" "Because! I have no legs!"

"Oh... Well that's okay!"

"I lost my legs in the war!" "(gasp) The war?!"

"Yes! The great pirate war!" "No. No pirates."

"The great pirate war!" "If you keep talking about pirates, I will punch you."

...

"I fought bravely, but I could not run fast enough-"

"They took my legs! There was blood everywhere!"

"Oh no, ew, no blood! Blood is disgusting!" "No? It's cool! (laughing)"

"Well, Banana Pudding is here to save the day!"

"With his magical feet he dances around with, he will dance all over Worm Horse and make him feel better!"

"And then... There will be more blood!"

Please leave Worm Horse alone, he doesn't need more blood. :((

I know the Worm Horse comparison/foreshadowing has been pointed out a million times before, but I love it (and hate it) so much that I had to do this. Here's to hoping there will not actually be more blood for Worm Horse.

*Squeezes Through A Crack in The Wall* I got another idea...

You know how Dazzle said Jack taught her how to kill someone, right? Imagine if she were prompted to do so in her new body.

Like, hypothetically (realistically, I'm 78% sure they wouldn't actually do this), Moon gives Dazzle a knife and forgets to tell Sun. Dazzle doesn't tell him because she doesn't think much of it, obviously.

But one day, when Dark Sun or Nexus, or whatever threat comes into the Daycare, Sun watches in horror as his little deer daughter just starts stabbing at their ankles.

Moon gives a quiet thumbs up. Lunar is cheering her on. Earth is too stunned to speak.

And after the threat is over, Sun tears Moon a new one- physically and/or verbally.

Okay, that is all. *Tries to squeeze back through the crack but fails*

I'll...just use the door.

GUYSSSS IM SO SCARED

FOUND THIS IN THE TLAES THUMBNAIL

Dialogue Thing #12 (It's been a minute...)

(CW for meds, I guess. If that's not right, lmk)

"You know what's great about living where I live!? There's just...free cats. Cats everywhere."

"Uh-huh. Those meds are really workin', aren't they bud?"

"I can feel them."

"That is a rug. You are lying on the floor."

"Why do... these cats taste salty?"

"And it's time to get you to bed."

Introduce characters

Here are some ways to introduce characters in a story

The Action Introduction, Show the character in the midst of an exciting or significant action. This immediately captures the reader's attention and gives them an impression of the character's personality. For example, "With a swift swing of her sword, Maya cleaved through the enemy ranks, her determined gaze never wavering."

The Dialogue Introduction, Introduce the character through a captivating conversation or monologue that reveals their thoughts, beliefs, or conflicts. This allows readers to get a glimpse into the character's personality and motivations. For example, "As the rain poured down, James leaned against the lamppost and muttered, 'Life's just a series of missed opportunities, isn't it?'"

The Physical Description Introduction, Describe the character's appearance in a vivid and memorable way. Focus on unique features or attributes that make them stand out. For example, "Her emerald-green eyes shimmered like pools of liquid wisdom, and her silver-streaked hair cascaded down her back like a flowing river."

The Entrance Introduction, Have the character make a grand entrance that immediately grabs attention. This could involve a dramatic arrival or an unexpected appearance that disrupts the scene. For example, "The doors swung open, and in walked a tall figure cloaked in darkness, their presence filling the room with an air of mystery and intrigue."

The Symbolic Introduction, Use symbolic elements or objects to introduce the character. This can be a powerful way to convey their personality or role in the story. For example, "As the sun set behind the mountains, a solitary figure emerged from the shadows, their footsteps leaving behind a trail of delicate rose petals."

The Flashback Introduction, Begin with a flashback or memory that provides insight into the character's past and sets the stage for their introduction in the present. This can create intrigue and a sense of anticipation. For example, "Sarah closed her eyes and let her mind drift back to that fateful day in her childhood, the day that shaped her into the strong, resilient woman she had become."

The Contrast Introduction, Introduce the character by highlighting a sharp contrast between their external appearance or behavior and their inner thoughts or emotions. This can create intrigue and pique the reader's curiosity. For example, "Despite his rugged exterior and tattooed arms, Jake possessed a gentle touch and a heart that yearned for love and acceptance."

DANG IT, MOON!!

Look, we all love you, but if you continue to lie like this, the truth will eventually come out in a VERY bad way...

At LEAST be honest with Sun...

(I am way too invested in this show. Am I gonna stop watching? Absolutely not.)

These two are precious beans and no one can tell me otherwise! I loved the scene where Dazzle and Sun hugged each other after she got her new body. It was very sweet and I had to draw it.

I love the bond these two have with each other so much. And I can't wait to see what else they’ll get into.

Dialogue Thing #8

"I like my boys how I like my girls..."

*Holding up a sketchbook* "With huge muscles?"

*Blushing furiously* "Where did you get that-"

(I apologize for my lack of consistency)